Writing T1W6

 I wake up with a shiny object in front of my front door it has a large cylinder like shape for its body it also has a cone for its head and last of all it has 4 jumpy legs that emit fire as it flys up into the sky. I jump inside my newly made rocket i grab my suit helmet and oxygen tank my suit is hot and sticky inside from my last trip into space.3! 2! 1! LIFT OFF! Wait what i go flying into the blue sky as i drift away i feel drowsy.

Phew i guess im still on earth but where are the buildings there were no houses around me or any signs of civilization just in case it was a different planet i got out my plant detector which would tell you the planet you're on but this was the first time it had never recognized the planet i had to know what was going on so the first thing i did was add this to the planet detector so everyone in the world would know this planet i had a look around and to my devastation i see behind me my rocket ship in small tiny pieces i dont know what do as im scared i could die on this unknown planet i calm down as i see a small river where i could get fresh water from. I slowly put my hands in a cup shape and get a big drink of water which calms me down heaps from getting on this unknown planet that has never been discovered.

AHH! What was that i stumbled back as I see a beady eye looking at me from the water a creature slowly crawls out of the water i shiver in fear as I run back to where i crash landed. I was as scared as a mouse being chased by a cat.I could no longer see the creature now i didnt know what to do this planet had many creatures that crocodile was very large at least four times bigger than a normal crocodile who knew if it was a baby one like in those movies were a big one is just only a baby. 

I gathered some big sticks and leaves to make a shelter so i can stay the night unharmed by any creatures I found a nice rock which I could use as a wall for my shelter I stabbed my two big sticks into the ground and stuck my leaves into the top of the sticks with the other end of the leaf laying on the big rock i had found i sat under my shelter as i looked at it turned night time the jungle came to life big yellow beady eyes looking straight into my soul its feet hooking on a tree branch I slowly drifted asleep.

I awaken in a warm cozy bed with the sunlight shining on my eyes i look away its so bright I drifted back to sleep hoping it was only a dream.

I quite liked this space writing it i couldn't all of it because it would be to long since that was only half the highlighted bit was my New Learning which was to show the characters feelings or there perspective.