Learning to Edit

 Crack! The cashew nuts were bouncing back and forth off the hard plastic sides of the food processor. We ended up getting the pesto early we grabbed a small spoon and dug the spoon deep down into the pesto bringing up a huge piece.

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The cashew nuts were bouncing back and forth off the hard plastic sides of the food processor. It buzzed as it cut up the basil leaves and the nuts. We ended up getting to taste the pesto early. We grabbed a small spoon and dug the spoon deep down into the pesto bringing up a humongous piece. It was all gooped together like a big blob of slime.

I thought learning to edit was pretty fun the stuff that was highlighted is my edited bits it was hard to think of new words to replace the old words I had but after a while i could catch on to the flow of it and now I know how to edit my pieces of writing. I think my writing piece here sounds a lot better then before it was edited.