So There I was in a world unknown to me there were bugs, animals, things I've never seen before. The first weird thing that had happened to me was when I just woke up here just randomly it was like I was just dropped here no warning no nothing at that time I thought it was a dream, an odd one at most. But no no no it was much more much much more. The first thing I saw looked like dinosaurs. A big long neck reached over me and looked down on me. It’s neck slowly started coming closer and closer until it was right in front of me. Its big mouth opened as it went in trying to grab me.
I galloped away on all fours. I screamed as I ran away at the time I had just found out it's not a dream. “AHHHHH” I said as I galloped I was hiding under the trees where it couldn’t get me. I thought that the dinosaur was a herbivore. The trees covered me from the burning hot sun. I had peace but not for long as the next thing I saw there was a tiger eating something behind me. I didn't know what it was eating because it didn't have a face. It was long dead at least I knew that. Luckily the tiger was still munching and wasn't chasing me. “Oh Yeah what happened to the so-called herbivore? I remember it being here,” I said in my mind. Badump! Badump! Badump! It was getting louder and closer. Badump! Badump Badump. And then when I looked up it was staring right at me...
Kia ora Jet, thank you for posting your awesome mahi this week. Your writing hooked me in, especially the second paragraph when you said "I galloped away on all fours", I thought 'wow! this story is written from a non-human perspective!' Excellent use of descriptive words and painting a picture of what is happening in your story. You have clearly set out your maths thinking, and this makes it nice for the audience to read and learn from your wide strategy knowledge. I enjoyed hearing about the book you are reading, the introduction was well said, you have a talent as a reviewer! Awesome to see you this week at our meet, look forward to seeing what you post next!
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