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Thursday, 20 May 2021

The Water Tribe

My New Learning:To Paragraph 

I think this is my favourite writing so far this year i do you like it?

The Water Tribe is a group of water benders that have come together. There are are two primary groups of water benders that live together the Southern Water Tribe and the Northern Water Tribe . The Water Tribe people are mostly friendly and just want to live together with the other nations but they can very deadly when paired with their animals.                                                                                                                    New Paragraph

Some people in the Water Tribe have pets. There are different animals you can find in the other nations but in the water tribe you can find animals beyond imagination. For instance the Otter Penguin which is a hybrid animal that can only be found in the Southern Water Tribe.It has whiskers like a cat that are very sensitive it can sense ripples in the water so if something come close they'll know. The penguins belly is tough and stretchy like a wetsuit in the water. Its white so it reflects the sun. However there black backs are perfect in the water there the same as their bellies but they absorb the heat. They warm up their backs and jump into the cold water there backs stay warm as they float in the cold water.                                New Paragraph

The penguins lie as they sense a new animal coming the Polar bear dog puts its front paw in the water the penguins kick back as the polar bear dog has a dip. The Polar bear dog has fur covered everywhere on its body except for its paws eyes and noise. Its fur keeps it warm in the water. Its large canine teeth help it chew up tough things and also its paws are padded so it can travel fast in the snow.

1 comment:

  1. Great writing Jet, you have added a lot of detail and factual information to ensure your audience is well informed. Remember to read through your writing out loud and listen for where you may need a comma. Excellent week Jet.

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