Writing

 Purpose:To Narrate

RT:To Paragraph

The agent in full black gallops after me disguising himself as he comes my way. I near a clothes shop hiding behind the racks and grabbing a hat that covers my face so the agent cant see me. I go in and out of the racks hiding from the agents at all costs. I dash out the shop seeing the agent follow me I get behind a building the agent scouts the area but doesnt find me. The agent walks off in to the distant town. What agent will come next?

The Supreme Agent

The supreme agent which is much more experienced follows after me turning every corner I turn in a second this was the supreme agent that has been after me for a long time know and was the won who made the idea for using me as a supreme strong agent that would listen to every command the agents sent me. The agents would do anything to do this they sent agents after agents chasing me so they could use me to take over the planet. They would be strong, in fact the strongest people on earth.

How it all begun

It all started when I was born the agents seeked me for my abnormal strength because of one special doctor this doctor had the powers to make people stronger by implanting something called potion-x this potion would make your muscles stronger. I needed potion-x when I was born because I was born with abnormally weak muscles. But the doctor put to much potion-x and my power erupted the agents seeked this doctor with his potion-x so the agents could get stronger but now they seek me for having the most potion-x in me.

This writing wasn't my favourite it was bit hard for me to do since I didn't have many ideas for this when I thought of identity nothing much came up into my head so it was a bit hard for me.

My Reading DLO

 This weeks reading was really fun I loved the word art and identity chart. I liked how you had to make the word art the same on both sides which made a really cool effect. The identity chart was pretty cool since its only you. Its your freedom its describing you which I think is pretty cool. 

My Big Blog Post Makeover

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Today we had to do something called a blog post makeover so I chose something on my blog that wasn't my favourite and I didn't really like it there. So I took the advice from the class and the teachers and I made improvements to my post I made it so that you could see and read the writing because on the bright background you wouldn't be able to read my DLO. Do you think I can make any more improvements to my DLO?

My Water Bending Experience

This reading we were learning how to inference with this reading we got given a picture and had to see what their thinking or feeling. I thought that was pretty cool.

Do you have any feedback for my DLO?

 

My Perimeter and Area DLO

 

All about me

The Water Tribe

My New Learning:To Paragraph 

I think this is my favourite writing so far this year i do you like it?

The Water Tribe is a group of water benders that have come together. There are are two primary groups of water benders that live together the Southern Water Tribe and the Northern Water Tribe . The Water Tribe people are mostly friendly and just want to live together with the other nations but they can very deadly when paired with their animals.                                                                                                                    New Paragraph

Some people in the Water Tribe have pets. There are different animals you can find in the other nations but in the water tribe you can find animals beyond imagination. For instance the Otter Penguin which is a hybrid animal that can only be found in the Southern Water Tribe.It has whiskers like a cat that are very sensitive it can sense ripples in the water so if something come close they'll know. The penguins belly is tough and stretchy like a wetsuit in the water. Its white so it reflects the sun. However there black backs are perfect in the water there the same as their bellies but they absorb the heat. They warm up their backs and jump into the cold water there backs stay warm as they float in the cold water.                                New Paragraph

The penguins lie as they sense a new animal coming the Polar bear dog puts its front paw in the water the penguins kick back as the polar bear dog has a dip. The Polar bear dog has fur covered everywhere on its body except for its paws eyes and noise. Its fur keeps it warm in the water. Its large canine teeth help it chew up tough things and also its paws are padded so it can travel fast in the snow.