I am a Year 6 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Kahikatea Hub and my teachers are Whaea Sharlee and Whaea Tamzin. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Jet! I really enjoyed reading your writing, you used describing words to add a lot of interest to your writing. Maybe next time you could aim to write a paragraph? Your maths thinking was set out clearly and could see how you saw patterns and worked them out, could you use multiplication for any of them? Great to see you at our meetings, keep up the excellent work!
Kia ora Jet! I really enjoyed reading your writing, you used describing words to add a lot of interest to your writing. Maybe next time you could aim to write a paragraph? Your maths thinking was set out clearly and could see how you saw patterns and worked them out, could you use multiplication for any of them? Great to see you at our meetings, keep up the excellent work!
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