Thursday, 30 July 2020
Writing T3 W2
I think you should not have to wear a school uniform because it's much heavier than some other clothes that you get from home. The ones at school will make you run slower because their a heavier material than some others.
Also if you lose it it will take a while to replace the jacket costs a lot of money it cost thirty dollars just for the jacket. So it would take a while to replace.
Finally you would make more clothes dirty when you get home you would change out of your school clothes using two clothes per day. But if you just wore one set a day you would save money with the washing machine for around 15 days you would use 7 extra gallons of water you want to save money using the washing machine don't you?
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hello jet.
ReplyDeleteYour piece of writing is amazing and it really had me thinking about if we should have a school uniform. I think looking at what you are showing we would save money and we would have a wider choice of what clothes to wear. You should edit the piece of writing and remove the dollar sign because you only use the dollar sign when it is in front of real numbers not letters. Do you have any other reasons that we should not have to wear a school uniform.
THank you for your feedback i removed the dollar sign
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