My Tivavae

Beepbox

 My beepbox experience was amazing I used multiple parts and layers to create my song I thought was really cool with pitch rhythm tempo and all that stuff it was amazing to put together a song. 

A Moment in Time

 The high barrier above me flaps up and down as the judges adjust the weird machine. It towers above me high in the sky.One point eight meters? Yea that seems good. I run up for my measure, not even. I can't even get close to the flap. Everyone sees the major difference from my perspective. Everyone starts to cheer louder so that I can hit this high barrier. Change in Feelings and feel more confident

Bang! Goes the board breaking behind me, thud! goes the sound of a kick hitting someone's gloves. Hup! I jump up into the air soaring high. I bring my legs up like walking in the air. Fwip! My leg flails the air missing by a hair. Ohhhh so close! calls the crowd in a sad voice.  The judges raise 1 flag getting me a point. The judges give some hand signals to the head judge and we keep going. The next one seems lower I think I can get this...

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Writing

 Purpose:To Narrate

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The agent in full black gallops after me disguising himself as he comes my way. I near a clothes shop hiding behind the racks and grabbing a hat that covers my face so the agent cant see me. I go in and out of the racks hiding from the agents at all costs. I dash out the shop seeing the agent follow me I get behind a building the agent scouts the area but doesnt find me. The agent walks off in to the distant town. What agent will come next?

The Supreme Agent

The supreme agent which is much more experienced follows after me turning every corner I turn in a second this was the supreme agent that has been after me for a long time know and was the won who made the idea for using me as a supreme strong agent that would listen to every command the agents sent me. The agents would do anything to do this they sent agents after agents chasing me so they could use me to take over the planet. They would be strong, in fact the strongest people on earth.

How it all begun

It all started when I was born the agents seeked me for my abnormal strength because of one special doctor this doctor had the powers to make people stronger by implanting something called potion-x this potion would make your muscles stronger. I needed potion-x when I was born because I was born with abnormally weak muscles. But the doctor put to much potion-x and my power erupted the agents seeked this doctor with his potion-x so the agents could get stronger but now they seek me for having the most potion-x in me.

This writing wasn't my favourite it was bit hard for me to do since I didn't have many ideas for this when I thought of identity nothing much came up into my head so it was a bit hard for me.

My Reading DLO

 This weeks reading was really fun I loved the word art and identity chart. I liked how you had to make the word art the same on both sides which made a really cool effect. The identity chart was pretty cool since its only you. Its your freedom its describing you which I think is pretty cool. 

My Big Blog Post Makeover

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                                                                         After

Today we had to do something called a blog post makeover so I chose something on my blog that wasn't my favourite and I didn't really like it there. So I took the advice from the class and the teachers and I made improvements to my post I made it so that you could see and read the writing because on the bright background you wouldn't be able to read my DLO. Do you think I can make any more improvements to my DLO?

My Water Bending Experience

This reading we were learning how to inference with this reading we got given a picture and had to see what their thinking or feeling. I thought that was pretty cool.

Do you have any feedback for my DLO?